Thursday, June 25, 2009

Each one's life a novel no-one else has read



Entre Nous - Rush


I'm down a phone again. My second warranty replacement Blackberry failed after I had it just over a week. That makes three bad phones in six months. I'd be pissed if I had time, but I'm so busy writing Blackout that I just keep right on trucking. To that end, I figured I'd share some excerpts from the third chapter with you. Enjoy!

The elevator bell dinged and the doors slid open. A few people looked up at the costumed heroes with interest. “Hi, everyone,” said Faith. “Ground floor, please.” They rode downward in silence until one woman asked hesitantly if she could have their autographs. Before the elevator finished its descent, Faith and Irlene had both signed several autographs.

“Is it always like this?” Irlene whispered as they crossed the lobby.

“Sometimes. Being in Just Cause makes you a celebrity, like if you were in a band.”

“Wow,” breathed Irlene. “I never thought that being a superhero would make me famous. Will I get to be on TV and in the papers?”

“Probably,” said Faith. She worked hard to keep her private life out of the media. At the end of the day, she wanted to be able to enjoy a quiet dinner with Bobby in a restaurant somewhere. They stepped out into the bright sunshine that peeked down between the other skyscrapers to illuminate the plaza.

“So what do we do?”

“Mostly we just be seen,” said Faith. “We’re a visual deterrent to street crime.”

“Street crime? We don’t go after parahuman villains?” Irlene stared unabashedly at the passing New Yorkers who took in the colorfully-attired women with typical aplomb.

Faith laughed. “I hate to burst your bubble, Irlene, but Just Cause hasn’t run across any parapowered criminals since early ’75.” She bent in and whispered conspiratorially. “We think we might have got them all.”

Irlene’s eyes widened behind her pink mask. “Really?”

Faith shrugged. “No way to tell for sure until someone new surfaces, but we’ve tracked down all the parahuman offenders we know of.”

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It hulked in a back corner of the yard, surrounded by numerous wrecks which Harlan had moved with the ingenious crane arrangement he’d built from more scrap parts. Anyone who didn’t know what it was would have only seen what looked like two semi truck cabs stacked on top of each other with some parts sticking out at random. But Harlan knew better.

He’d built a suit.

Not just any suit, either. This one was big. It crouched on four heavy hydraulic legs powered by the Diesel engine in the lower truck cab. When he powered them up, the rig would raise itself up to a fearsome height, nearly fifteen feet tall. The suit’s feet were padded with numerous layers of rubber, carefully cut and fitted from rotting tires. The upper cab boasted four arms, designed not for any purpose except destruction. Two housed mobile versions of the belt-fed bolt guns, one of which had killed the vagrant. Another carried a powerful flamethrower with a large tank of pressurized fuel. The last held a huge circular saw blade. Harlan had found it in a disused corner of the junkyard. It must have belonged to a timber mill at some point, but now it ran on Diesel power from the upper cab. Heavy armor plating protected the engines and hydraulics, and the pilot’s cabin at the very top of the suit was armored like a pillbox.

He had no name for the suit. He didn’t even know exactly why he’d built it, except he was compelled to. When he dreamed, gears and pistons and hoses filled his thoughts. The only time he truly felt good about himself—happy, even—was when he was working on the suit. He felt almost like it was an extension of himself, like he was building a second skin to go outside of his own.

He’d never switched it on, but he knew it would work flawlessly, as did everything he ever designed and built. When that day finally came, he’d crawl into the machine’s belly and become a part of it, and he would feel complete for the first time in his life.

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“Where do you want to head first?” asked Tommy.


“Central Park,” said Javier without hesitation. “Then I don’t care.” He whooped and leaped between the steel louvers into the open air beyond. A moment later, his boot rockets flared and he began a spiraling descent toward a more reasonable altitude. Tommy followed him out, letting the winds buoy him after his patrol partner.

Javier – as Javelin – flew fast enough that Tommy had to summon a minor gale to catch up to him. The Puerto Rican man headed for Central Park like he was possessed.

“Did we get a call already?” Tommy shouted over the rushing wind. Most of the team had to use walkie-talkies, something Tommy found awkward and distracting while airborne, but Javier’s radio was built right into his helmet.

Javier didn’t immediately reply. They cruised lengthwise along the southern edge of the giant park. People on the paths looked up as the heroes flew past. Many of them smiled and waved. Tommy waved back; Just Cause was as popular as ever. “There!” called Javier and pointed. Tommy saw a small group of four young black men turn to flee toward some trees. “Cut ‘em off, Tommy!”

The winds blew fierce around Tommy as he swooped in to block the four men. One of them pulled a cheap pistol from his waistband. A concentrated burst of air sent it flying into the underbrush and left the man wringing his hand in pain. They turned to flee from Tommy and Javier dropped down in front of them. He fired a particle beam blast into the ground, leaving behind ashes and charred dirt.

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Shane glanced at her as he changed lanes to avoid a stalled box truck. Horns and some angry shouts filtered into the cab. “You could always crash at my place. I mean, you know, on the couch,” he added quickly as she stiffened.

“Your roommate won’t mind?” she asked, feeling her cheeks grow hot. The power hidden inside her growled like a living thing, begging to be let out to play for awhile. She concentrated on keeping it controlled, telling herself that this man was not trying to hurt her the way Donny had.

“I barely see him. When he’s not in school, he’s working. He won’t mind.”

“I’ll think about it.” He smiled for a moment before leaning on the horn at a lady in a big Dodge station wagon who wouldn’t be denied her lane change. “Learn how to drive, you asshole!” he yelled out the window. She shook her fist at him.

It was such a cliché New York moment that Gretchen broke out in giggles.

Shane chuckled and took a crumpled cigarette pack from the clutter on his dashboard. “Smoke?” he asked as he thumbed out a Camel and stuck it between his lips.

“No thanks, I don’t smoke.”

He paused with his lighter halfway to his mouth. “Oh. Uh, do you mind if I do?”

She shrugged. “There’s so much gunk in the air here, I don’t think I’d notice.”

Wednesday, June 24, 2009

Do you smile to tempt a lover, Mona Lisa?



Mona Lisa - Seal


Thanks to Rachel for this tip. John Scalzi (a far more successful writer than I) has an excellent blog post here about why most new novelists are thirtysomethings like me instead of twentysomethings like in most other artistic fields. Go read it now, and then come back soon for more of my irregularly-scheduled blogging (and, quite possibly, more excerpts from Blackout (still hating the title, but whatcha gonna do? (hey look, nested parentheses! It's like I'm using OpenOffice Calc.!))).

Monday, June 15, 2009

Straight up to my bedroom we go



Sugarfoot - Black Joe Lewis & The Honeybears


In case you haven't figured it out by now, the titles of my blog posts are ripped from the lyrics of the songs I post. Why? I dunno ...

Three of you (which, near as I can figure, represents approximately 60% of my current readership) asked me questions, so here are my answers to Ask a Writer:

Julie asks:

So I'm interested in know how you feel about publishing now that you have an agent? Where are you in the submission process, and if you've discussed future project with your agent, or if she doesn't like an idea for a future project, do you still plan to write it? For example, the vampires on Ice? Why yes, I can write one hell of a run-on sentence...

I feel that publishing moves at approximately the speed of stop, which is just under the speed of slow. Publishing will drive you crazy if you're impatient for success (which certainly doesn't describe ME, does it?). As far as I know, my agent has not yet submitted any of my work to any editors. If she has, I'm not aware of it. The last we spoke, she said she was still researching which editors to reach out toward. I have not discussed in great detail any future projects with her at this time, although I have sent her a list of proposed novels to fall within the Just Cause universe. At the moment, I'm going to write whatever the hell I feel like writing, because I have nobody with a checkbook suggesting otherwise.

The Charming Hedonist asks:

Does it ever feel like a job to you now that you must write and meet deadlines?

Long story short, no. Nobody is giving me any deadlines, and I'm generally much harder on myself about production than anyone else will be (hel-LO? 5-time NaNoWriMo winner?). Regardless, even if a publisher with money practically falling out of its ass sets me a deadline to write the next book in a series (for example), I'm STILL getting PAID to WRITE, which is the entire reason I'm doing all this.

Pamela asks:

Anyway, knowing that you "have to write".... does it make it less exciting?

Nope. I HAVE to write, whether or not someone's signing me the checks. If I don't write, I'll go crazy. That's why I've been writing for free for so long - because it keeps the demons at bay.

Thanks for your questions! Tune in again soon...

Tuesday, June 09, 2009

Okay, three, two, one, let's jam!



Tank! Live* - The Seatbelts


It's been awhile since I've done one of these, but since I'm feeling a lot more like a writer these days (on account of I'm writing daily and really cranking out the word mileage on Blackout), I'm ready to take your questions. So once again, it's time to Ask a Writer. If you have questions you'd like me to answer for you, related to my work, the craft in general, or even (to some extent) completely unrelated to writing*, leave them in the comments and I will answer them in a subsequent post.

*I reserve the right to laugh at you like a donkey and ignore your foolish question if I feel it to be too ridiculous or pedantic.

Thursday, June 04, 2009

My hellraising days



Deep Shag - Luscious Jackson


What's this?! Two blog posts from me in one week? Go ahead, you can reel if you want to.

I just went over 100 pages and 27k words in Blackout, and thought I'd drop a few more teaser sections, this time from Chapter 2. This first scene introduces Lionheart, the leader of Just Cause:

In spite of regulations, the team was able to finagle a few training amenities on-site, and it was in the dojo where Faith found Lionheart doing his morning forms. Richard Lyons looked like he was frozen halfway between a transformation between man and lion. Tawny fur covered his dense, powerful muscles, and a magnificent golden mane framed his leonine features as both hair and beard. His nose and jaw protruded forward slightly to give him an even more bestial appearance. Instead of finger and toenails, he had razor-sharp claws, and his teeth were best-suited for tearing flesh. In an earlier age, he might have been hunted as a demon or worshiped as a god, but now he was the leader of Just Cause.

He’d developed his own style of Kung Fu after studying for years with some of the best Chinese masters. He called it, naturally, Lion Style. It complemented his greater-than-human strength and toughness, and incorporated many of the moves which lions themselves used when taking down prey. Faith watched the play of his muscles under his tawny fur as he leaped and spun through the air, carving furrows in the wooden combat dummies around him which had to be replaced weekly because he wore them out so quickly.

Eventually he wound down his routine. The training room air was heavy with the musky scent of his sweat as he swiped a towel from a hook and hung it over his shoulders. He smiled at Faith with a mouthful of sharp fangs. “Early as always, I see.”

She held up a thermos. “I brought you coffee, Rick.”

“My hero,” he said as he took it and unscrewed the top to inhale deeply of the fragrant steam.

She grinned up at him; he towered over her by a foot. “Always in the right place at the right time. That’s me.”


This next scene is from the team's morning conference. If you get a sense that these superheroes might have other priorities besides keeping the peace, you're right.

“Since we’re all here, I call the meeting to order,” said Bobby formally. Side conversations died down as the Just Cause heroes dutifully turned their attention to the team administrator. Lionheart ran the team in the field, but here behind the walls of headquarters, Bobby ran the show. “For those of you who weren’t paying attention, we have a new member joining us today. Her name is Irlene Washington and goes by the moniker Imp. She can fly and shrink herself, objects, and people.”

“Shrinking? What good would that be?” asked Javier as he wrinkled his nose at the coffee.

“I can think of a half dozen useful applications offhand,” said Lionheart thoughtfully. “Crowd control, reducing collateral damage, insurgence and stealth.”

“She’s in the offices, getting her paperwork all in order. Devereaux will bring her in a little while to meet everyone. Faith is going to show her what we do here in Just Cause.”

“Besides partying, you mean?” asked Faith pointedly.

Bobby’s brow wrinkled in consternation. “Yes, there’s that. Maybe we should tone things down a little. Make a good first impression.”

Javier’s snort carried clearly across the room. “It’s Wednesday,” he said as if that were all that mattered.

“Oh, that reminds me,” said Sundancer. “I’ve got extra tickets to the Mets game tonight. Anybody want to join me?”

“Count me in,” said John Stone. “I love baseball.”

“I’ll join you,” said Tommy.

Sundancer smiled. “That’s handled, then. Count us out for poker tonight.”

“May as well have a party, then,” said Javier. “They introduce eligible young ladies at parties, don’t they? We ought to introduce Imp to our adoring public.”


In this next scene, we learn a little more about 13-year-old Harlan, and just how deep his psychopathy really runs:

The sentry turrets looked innocuous, placed around the junkyard in locations where they could cover significant areas. They were tied into the same systems that detected motion and heat, and if the offending intruder didn’t leave the area after a certain number of seconds, the turrets would go into action.

Harlan called them eggbreakers, because he’d once heard someone say you can’t make an omelet without breaking a few eggs.

Every so often, he’d find a dead dog or cat out in the open spaces of the junkyard, the victim of an eggbreaker turret. The cleverly-designed devices fired engine block bolts like deadly projectiles, using a propellant which Harlan mixed himself with a half dozen different ingredients including gasoline and talcum powder. It had never occurred to him that what he was doing was wrong. The animals were wrong for trespassing on his territory, and he didn’t even bat an eye when he had to clean up the bloody remains of a shattered animal. To the contrary, he rather enjoyed the vindication of his design.

As he crawled out of the Buick’s trunk, he found a new victim awaiting him. A man lay face-down amid a large bloodstain with one hand outstretched and snagged in the tarpaulin covering Harlan’s giant robot. Flies flew around the man so thickly they might have been a solid cloud, nearly obscuring the man’s tattered and shabby clothing.

Harlan froze as he took in the grisly scene laid out before him. The man might have been a hobo or vagrant. He might have come in over the fence, or even accidentally found Harlan’s secret entrance. Maybe he was looking for something to steal or sell for a few pennies. He’d ignored the warning sounds and gotten a little too curious for his own good. The buzzing of the flies matched the humming in Harlan’s brain. This wasn’t an accident. This was a purpose. This man was dead because Harlan had intended it. It made him feel powerful.

“Got you,” whispered Harlan. “I got you, you fucker.”


This last section details just how frightened Gretchen is of her powers and how much control she really has over them.

She bent to pick up her bag and another hand closed on the handle beside hers. She gasped as she saw a man with greasy black hair flowing out from under a fedora grinning at her. A toothpick rested in the corner of his mouth and a gold tooth gleamed in the morning sunlight.

Buenas dias, señorita. New in town?” He had an accent kind of like some of the Mexicans who came to work in the fields in Dyersville, but looked both cleaner and, well, slimier than they did.

“That’s my bag,” said Gretchen. Fear arose in her as if someone had turned a spigot. She tugged meekly at it.

“Easy, chica. I didn’t mean anything by it. You look like a lost little lamb, and I’m just a good Samaritan. Do you need a ride somewhere? Someplace to stay?” He looked her up and down like a prospective buyer taking in the lines of a new car. “Something to eat?”

“I’m fine, really. Will you please let go of my bag?” Gretchen tried to keep the terrified shudder out of her voice but didn’t quite succeed.

“Everything okay here, miss?” asked the bus driver as he lit a new cigarette.

“We’re just talkin’,” said the man in the hat. “Ain’t no law against talkin’.”

The bus driver looked at Gretchen, looked at the man with his hand still on her bag, and apparently decided not to get involved further, for he shrugged and walked away.

“Please,” whispered Gretchen. “Please let go.”

“What you so afraid of, sweetmeat? I ain’t gonna hurt you. I’m just tryin’ to be nice. Now why don’t you come with me and we’ll get a sandwich and talk about it.” He lifted the bag.

“Please don’t.” Tears spilled down Gretchen’s face. She hadn’t been in New York a minute and here she was already about to get mugged. This was the kind of thing that her parents had shaken their heads at over the dinner table. Big cities were full of people like this man here, always looking to prey on the helpless. Pimps, muggers, serial killers.

The power leaped out of Gretchen, unbidden. “No!” she yelped as it sought a target and centered on the greasy-haired man. She wouldn’t kill again. She steered it aside at the last moment. Each tire along the side of the bus facing her crumpled and imploded sequentially. The Greyhound bus shuddered and lurched as it lost its support. The power wasn’t finished yet, and Gretchen gasped as a softball-sized sphere of air somewhere inside the bus cabin vanished into nothingness. The resultant blast of thunder shattered every window in the bus. People yelled in surprise and belatedly clapped their hands to their ears.


Hope you enjoyed the sneak peeks!

Tuesday, June 02, 2009

Lots of people talk and few of them know



Dazed and Confused - Led Zeppelin


...but a few of those people who DO know are some of my fellow blogging authors, and I want to share links for them with you so you can read those who are at times far more prolific bloggers than I am.

-Allie's blog is tied into her editing business, which I can't recommend enough. Stop by and say hi to her at Allison Edits.

-If you only pick one blog from this list to add to your feeds, it should be Anne Mini's blog. Sheer brilliance. If you want to learn, well, anything about writing, editing, or publishing, she's probably covered it on Author! Author!

-Less about writing and more about life in general (as well as some very interesting tales about Boot Camp and psychotic in-laws), I happen to know Maleesha is a writer and I'm looking forward to seeing some of her work. Check out Binary Trash.

-DeAnna told me one of the funniest jokes I've ever heard at this year's PPWC. I reproduce it for you here faithfully and attribute it to her:

DeAnna: So did you hear about Postman Bob?
Ian: No!
DeAnna: He lost his job! Know what they call him now?
Ian: No!
DeAnna: Bob!


I guess maybe you had to be there. Anyway, visit her at the House of D.

-Tamara is Canadian, which I think means she's outdoorsy or something. She's written a lot of books and is inspirational to others. Take a gander at The Writer's Mentor.

-Rachel is a dear friend of mine who I keep bullying into writing instead of planning to write. Yeah, I'm hardcore that way. Anyway, she usually has interesting things to say over at Rachel's Lessons Learned.

-Tom Mach is a fellow author with the same agent as me (I love dropping that I have an agent now!). He's got a different perspective, being from Kansas and all, but he's got a lot of intelligent things going on over at Novels, Poems and Plays by Tom Mach.

-Like serial fiction? Claudia is posting two serial novels on her blog On A Limb.

-Megan is a two-time ABNA veteran like me, and like me she didn't get very far this year. In spite of that, she's a good friend and in need of more visitors over at Ravings, Rants, & Writing.

-For awhile I was afraid Sherri had given up writing altogether. You can imagine how happy I was to discover she was working her way back into it again. Stop by and tell her hi (but don't wear any perfume - she'll thank you for it) at Sherri Blossoms.

-Andi needs all the support she can get, because she's still Unhinged.

-Kristen just started a brand spankin' new writing blog From A Little Office In A Little House.

I'm sure there are more I've left out, so feel free to add links in your comments if I forgot anybody.