Monday, July 27, 2009

Just like everybody else does


How Soon Is Now - The Smiths

Guess it's time to share some more excerpts, this time from Chapter 4.

Faith led the flying Irlene across the square to the nearby police station. Officers whooped and elbowed one another as the two costumed women entered the building.

“Pony Girl, always a pleasure,” said the desk sergeant. “Who’s your friend?”

“Boys, this is Imp. She’s our newest team member. Please make her feel welcome.”

“I’ll make her feel welcome,” hooted a plainclothes detective.

“A little fellow like you?” countered Faith with a wink at Irlene.

“Little?” The detective drew himself up to his full height. It would have been more impressive if he didn’t immediately shrink down to four feet tall. “Hey, what the hell?” Raucous guffaws echoed through the station.

“All right, knock that shit off,” hollered the sergeant. “Can we please try to act like professionals?” He turned to Faith and smiled. “What have you got for us today?”

“Purse snatcher,” said Faith. Irlene displayed the perpetrator, who looked a little green from being slung around like a doll.

The sergeant adjusted his glasses. “Whose purse did he steal, Barbie’s?”

“Imp, if you’d be so kind …” Faith gestured at Irlene, who was staring around the police station at the cops and arrestees and the intricate ballet of organized chaos.

Irlene raised a hand and pointed at the purse snatcher. He grew slowly until he was back to his original size.

“Now that’s more like it,” said the sergeant, and fed a fresh form into a typewriter.


* * *

Harlan leaped to his feet eagerly and hurried toward the rear of the shop. He glanced back once at Gonsalvo. The man was examining the door handle closely under a workbench light.

Harlan slipped into the Parts Room, lit only by a naked bulb hanging from the ceiling and bits of sun leaking in through a window encrusted with decades of grease and dust. He closed his eyes and inhaled deeply. Stale lubricants provided a sharp tang to the air, balanced by the bright accents of copper and steel, the sweetness of plastic, the subtle cool of ceramics, and underneath it all the persistent thrum of rust and dust. With the scents of industry flooding his head and making his mind whirl with possibilities, Harlan dove into the drawers, piles, and stacks of parts in search of the elusive thermocouples. Minutes stretched as he sorted through mysterious pieces, occasionally pocketing those he thought he’d need for his own work. He didn’t consider it stealing; that was why he brought Gonsalvo parts for Carmella. The old mechanic understood Harlan like nobody else in the world. Given a chance, Harlan thought he might like to come work for Gonsalvo and maybe someday the garage would be his.

“Hey, Harlan, come out here a minute,” called Gonsalvo.

Just then, Harlan saw the parts he’d sought. He must have looked right at them four or five times and not seen them. He grinned and tucked them into his bulging pockets and then sauntered back into the shop.


* * *

Tommy’s radio beeped. He pulled it from his belt. “Tornado,” he said.

“Tommy, it’s Bobby. I can’t reach Javier.”

“He had to head back to his place. For repairs,” lied Tommy.

“Ah,” replied Bobby in a voice which implied he knew Tommy was being dishonest. “Anyway, there’s a potential jumper on the GWB. Are you close enough to intervene?”

Tommy turned to look toward the George Washington Bridge. He could see flashing lights on the distant deck. “Affirmative. I’m on my way.”

He summoned up gale-force winds to carry him quickly over the water, his eyes locked on a white speck where none should be-against one of the towers. As he barreled onward, the speck resolved itself into a young woman who perched on a narrow ledge just out of reach of the NYPD officers trying to reach her. Tommy poured on the speed because he could see the woman was so distressed. As he approached, she either slipped or jumped.

He had only moments to react. He created a powerful updraft beneath the tumbling woman. The swirling air mass sucked up water from the Hudson into a powerful miniature waterspout that slowed her fall. Without hesitation, Tommy dove into the spinning air and water to gather up the shrieking woman in his arms. Air buoyed them both to safety on the far bank. Tommy pushed his sopping hair out of his face. They were both drenched from his waterspout.

“Are you all right?” He took the woman gently by her shaking shoulders as sobs racked her. She collapsed into him and bawled like a child. He held her awkwardly as she clung to him.

“I’m sorry, I’m sorry,” she repeated like a refrain.


* * *

Shane smoked cigarette after cigarette as he drove the service truck through the streets of Harlem. He’d explained that if he didn’t have specific job duties, he was supposed to “monitor” the local power grid for any trouble or potential repairs. “They train us to watch for loose power lines or to recognize the sound of a transformer blowing or whatever.”

“I always thought power guys just hung around drinking coffee and eating donuts until something went wrong,” admitted Gretchen.

“When we can,” laughed Shane. “But I’m trying to give you a better impression of New Yorkers. How am I doing so far?”

“Not bad.”

“Hey, you hear that? Under the sound of the traffic?”

Gretchen cocked her head and listened. Just barely, she could hear a humming, hissing sound. It reminded her of something from a mad scientist’s lab in an old black and white movie. “I think so,” she said.

“That’s a dying transformer.” Shane checked his mirrors and then cut across two lanes of traffic onto a side street. “Any second now …” Gretchen heard a loud bang like a gunshot and saw a puff of black smoke rise a block away. “There it goes,” said Shane. “Now I get to play hero, because I’ll be Johnny-on-the-spot.”

“Shane on the spot,” said Gretchen.

Wednesday, July 22, 2009

What's wrong with you? Man, get the other record! Damn!


High 5 (Rock The Catskills) - Beck

I have a confession. It's not something that's necessarily easy to admit, but I want to put it out there because it needs to be said.

*deep breath*

I hate rereading my own work.

There, that wasn't so bad. When I say rereading, I don't mean as part of the editing/rewriting process. I expect that and often look forward to it because it gives me multiple chances to fix things. No, what I hate is rereading something I declared finished. I equate finished with submission-ready. And when something is submission-ready and has been submitted (either to an agent before I was agented or to an editor now), I really can't change anything. So when I declare a particular project to be finished, it means I have made it as good as I believe I possibly can and don't intend to make any further changes except at the behest of an editor.

I've recently had opportunity to read two of my pieces to small audiences - one, a short story for my children, and the other several chapters of Troubleshooters to one of my oldest friends. I found myself mentally cringing throughout, itching to make changes here and there and everywhere. I simply can't leave well-enough alone, it seems. I've heard of other writers suffering from this same malady. Indeed, many actors never watch their completed films. Perhaps they see it as a regression instead of a development of their craft, focusing on what has already passed instead of what is yet to come.

This is something I didn't know about myself until now, because until very recently I haven't opened any of my finished pieces. I must have already understood this issue at a subconscious level.

Oh, the things we learn about ourselves.

Sunday, July 12, 2009

Let me sleep so my teeth don't grind


Grind - Alice In Chains

I was asked by a friend tonight if I'll keep up my webcomic (found here for the one or two of you who still don't know about it by now) after I'm a famous writer. That's a good question, and one without an easy answer. Like so many things I do, it's yet one more strain on my time that takes away from writing, or family, or editing, or sleep.

But is it really just a lark? A hobby? Or is it something more important than that?

I've learned a whole lot about storytelling from producing this strip. I've learned how to carry a story arc through a series of adventures and misadventures. I've learned how to be funny in only four panels (which is honestly pretty difficult - I know I fall flat at times, but I've also had people comment that they've spat mouthfuls of beverage across their screens/keyboards, so I must be doing something right from time to time). I've learned how to let dialogue carry a story, and the usefulness of the "Beat," or silent panel. Like anything else, comedy is all in the timing, even when it's written.

I've nearly quit the webcomic half a dozen times over the past three years for various reasons, any of which would be a perfectly legitimate reason to pack up my toys and go home. However, I've ultimately decided each time to continue with it, and that often brings a fresh perspective and new plotlines to explore.

So will I continue with it when I'm famous? Honestly, I don't know. I'd like to think I'll still have stories to tell in my little plastic soap opera. I've heard that once you're published, your non-writing time spent publicizing your writing tends to crowd out most other things in your life. But I've invested a lot of time into these characters, and have a lot of regular readers invested in them as well, and I'd hate to disappoint my fanbase.

There's a saying that when there's another mouth to feed, you just scramble the eggs, mash the potatoes, and add water to the soup. I suppose if that means my time will be watery soup, then so be it.

Monday, July 06, 2009

50k



Smoothie Song - Nickel Creek


Normally I use a lyric to title posts, but this is a lovely bluegrass instrumental that puts me in a happy mood. And it's a good time to be happy, because I went over 50,000 words in tonight. If this was November, I'd be crowing about hitting the mark for a 6th year running, but it's July and this is my untimed summer novel. It might have been another Centum Dies Libri like Deep Six was, but I started on March 23, and it's been 106 days and counting, so I'm off that pace by quite a bit. On the other hand, I'm very happy with the progress I am making. In the hour-by-hour format of each chapter, I've covered from 8 AM to 8 PM. In the 9:00 hour, the power goes out, and from that point forward many things change for my characters over the course of a very long night punctuated by love and loss, death and destruction, friends and fire, victims and violence, and all the alliteration you could allow.

It's going to be a fun ride to the end.

Wednesday, July 01, 2009

Baby Silvertooth, she grins and grins



Feed The Tree - Belly


Wish me luck. My agent has submitted Deep Six (and, ergo, the entire Just Cause Universe series) to editors at two publishers. If I'm extremely fortunate, both publishers will make an offer, which means that we go to an auction and they bid for the rights. I'd be ecstatic if just one of them takes it. Honestly, so long as my work winds up on bookstore shelves, I'd be okay with the publishing equivalent of the Mrs. Grace L. Ferguson Airline and Storm Door Company (tip of the hat to Bob Newhart for that one).

But I'd prefer a big publisher. Who wouldn't, in this industry?

Anyway, it could be anywhere from a month to a year (or *gulp* even longer) before anybody gets to my stuff. I'm hopeful that we might have an answer by mid-Fall.

In other news, I've decided on a title and genre for my 2009 NaNoWriMo book. I'm not giving away details (those of you who've talked with me outside of the blogosphere certainly know more about it), but the book will be called Blood on the Ice and in a genre I'm calling Urban Fantasy Hockey.

Yeah, it'll be funny.